本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.

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本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.
现在,社会越来越重视感恩教育.心怀感恩的重要性.我的看法
nowdays,peoole pay more and more attention to learning to be grateful wherever in school or society.as a student,we should learn to thank to our teachers because they teach us knowledge.as a children,we must thank to our parents because they bring us to the world.
it is improtant for us to have a grateful heart.someone who lose the grateful heart,they cannot reach others' help when they need.on the one hand,we should realize the important of learning to be grateful.on the other hand,we must know how to thank to the person who give us a hand,
in my view,firstly,parents should teach their children to learn to be grateful since child.secondly,school should set up the grateful course,helping students to know the
meaning of grateful easier.thirdly.we have to realize the important of learning tobe grateful by ourselves.

(Nowdays改为Nowadays), people pay more and more attention to learning to be grateful (wherever in school or society改为both at school and in the society较为妥当).As a student,we should learn to thank (to 去掉,thank是及物动词) our teachers because（ they teach us knowledge汉式英语,改为they impart knowledge to us with absolutely no regrets）.As a (children改为单数的child), we must thank （to去掉） our parents because they （bring 改为过去式的brought）us to the world.
it is （improtant拼写错误,应为important） for us to have a grateful heart.someone who lose the grateful heart,（they 去掉,你此处已经用主语从句,不能再有主语了）cannot (reach 改为get）others' help when they need（加help）.on the one hand,we should realize the （important 改为名次importance）of learning to be grateful.on the other hand,we must know how to thank （to去掉） the person who （give改为gives） us a hand,
in my view,firstly,parents should teach their children to learn to be grateful since （child改为childhood）.secondly,school should set up the grateful course,helping students to know the
meaning of grateful easier. thirdly.we have to realize the （important 改为名次importance） of learning to be grateful by ourselves.
总体上还可以,十分应该没问题,继续努力,有问题找我,乐意帮忙!