本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?31

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本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?31
公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Most Chinese man are smoke,no matter they are working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the harm of smoke,most of them have gave up smoke,but we could see some people smoking in public places before now wherever we went to.
Smoking in public places ,causing a series of problems.Firstly,that will make the people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places make the environment worse.In order to not affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoking in public places.
What is the meaning of ban smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effection way to reduce the number of smoking people.Secondly,it can keep others' not be affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment not be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places

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公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Many Chinese people smoke,no matter when they are working,chatting or waitting.Nowadays,most people have realized the harm of smoking and have given up smoking.But not too long ago,we could see some people smoking in most public places.
Smoking in public places causes a series of problems.Firstly,it will make the people around you feel annoyed（您应该是想说让人烦,而不是让人觉得无聊吧?因此我改了个形容词.）.Secondly,smoking in public places makes the environment worse.In order not to affect others and pollute the environment,one had better not to smoke in public places.
What is the meaning of banning smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effective way to reduce the number of people smoking.Secondly,it can keep others from being affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment from being polluted.So I agree to ban smoking in public places.