3篇英语文章,希望帮忙改正类似语法,句子不通顺,使用不当之类的错误.

3篇英语文章,希望帮忙改正类似语法,句子不通顺,使用不当之类的错误.
Saving the world
Hello every one,my speech topic is “Saving the world”.
As you know,our world is changing all the time.The weather is worse,the temperature is rising,the plants are less,the ice sheets are melting,many bodies of water are polluting and so on.
Of course,people have discovered many problems and trying to save the world.People used to drive the car to work.Because the world is becoming warmer.People are trying to go to the work by bus,ride a bike or on foot now.
We can also do many things to save the world although we are only the students.As we can see,China has the biggest population in the world.But China has less than many countries’ plants.What can we do?We can grow the plants and we can economy the paper.
However,it is never too early to save the world.East,west,home is best.In fact,we can’t leave the world so we must keep the world from becoming worse.I hope our world can be clean and healthy once again.
My dream job
Hello every one,my speech topic is “My dream job”.
When I grow up,I’m going to be a doctor-a most successful doctor,a real doctor.I think doctor is a greatest and glorious job.I admire doctors.Doctors are very important although many people don’t like them.But,as we can see,we can’t lose doctors or hospitals when we are sick.
But how am I going to be a doctor?First,I am going to study hard in the middle school and study biology batter.If I studied biology very good,I would study medicine easier.Then,I am going to be a student at a medical college.I’m going to work harder in the school.
It’s very difficult to be a good doctor.But I believe I can do it.I hope I can help many sick people,I can save many people.I can be a special and important one.I believe-yes I can!
An unforgettable weekend
Hello every one,my speech topic is “An unforgettable weekend”.
I had a really bad weekend last week.
Last Saturday,the same as usual,I got up at 9 o’clock.I went to kitchen and wanted to eat breakfast.But my father forces me to do exercise before I eat breakfast.“You must do exercise first,it can keep your health.” My father said.
I was running and running.After I ran half an hour and skipped 500 times.I was very tired and hungry.I got home at 10 o’clock.I walked right through the gate and went to the kitchen.I looked around kitchen,but I found nothing.I asked my father:“Dad,have you seen my breakfast?”“Well,no.I think your mother’s cat ate it.” My father said.“What?Are you joking?” Finally I made breakfast by myself.I ate my breakfast at 11 o’clock,maybe it is called lunch.
What a bad weekend although it’s unforgettable,isn’t it?
我比较急,希望可以尽快~好的话分数可以再加~

Saving the World
Hello,every one!My speech topic is “Saving the World”.
As we know,our world is in danger.The weather is getting worse and worse.The temperature is rising.The plants are becoming less and less.The ice sheets are melting.Many water bodies are being polluted and so on.
To our delight,people have realized these problems and are trying to save the world.They used to drive to work.But now they don't.They go to work by bus,by bike or on foot now.
We can also do many things to save the world although we are only students.As we can see,China has the biggest population in the world.But China has less plants than many countries.What can we do?We can grow plants and reuse paper.
However,it is never too early to save the world.East,west,home is best.In fact,we can’t leave the world so we must keep the world from becoming worse.I hope our world can be clean and healthy again.
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