昨晚写了一篇文章,有没有英语高手帮忙看一下哪里有语法、时态之类的错误.

昨晚写了一篇文章,有没有英语高手帮忙看一下哪里有语法、时态之类的错误.
有五年多没学过英语了,靠着以前的老本,因为心情问题写了一篇文章,帮忙看一下,有错的地方帮忙指正,谢谢.
Wrote With The Mood
I feel upset,really,for many reasons.I don’t know how to adjust myself but to face the reality and keep telling myself to hold on.For too long,I have been searching too many excuses which have given me too much hope. But now, when all these facts come rush to me at a time, I can’t even convince myself.
Sometimes,seeing so many former workmates leave me one by one,I would really feel sad,both for them and our company.For one thing,it is a pity that we are not being able to work together anymore,for another our company have fail us.I believe,there are at lest half of my workmates have the same feeling.Because we get no money,no time and no freedom,and even no privacy.But again,we have to face it when talking about the high unemployment.
What I have said above is about work,and what I am going to say is about life.As a single,in the remote city,I can’t not being together with family,though it is my choice,but the cost of living is really unable to bear.The price of house is also desperate.
About love,Frankly,I’ve got nothing to say.I am in love with a girl,but what a pity, it seems to be impossible,for now,at lest.But I don’t care,She should be my only reason to hold on,no matter how,If she do not leave, I will not abandon.
Maybe I need some more time to adjust myself.

Something on the(my) Mood
I feel 【really】upset for many reasons.I don’t know how to adjust myself but to face the reality and keep telling myself to hold on.For too long,I have been searching too many excuses which have given me too much hope.But now,when all these facts come 【rushing】 to me at a time,I can’t even convince myself.
Sometimes,seeing so many former workmates leave me one by one,I would really feel sad,both for them and 【for】our company.For one thing,it is a pity that we are not being able to work together anymore;for another,our company 【has failed 】us.I believe,there are at lest half of my workmates 【having(前面there are,已经有谓语)】 the same feeling.Because we【have】【not much】 money,no 【free】time and【little】 freedom,and even no privacy.【However】,we have to face it when talking about the high unemployment.
What I have said above is about work,and what I am going to say is about 【my】 life.As a single,in the remote city,I can’t not【stay】 together with 【my】 family.【Although/Though】it is 【from】my choice,【yet】the cost of living is really unable to bear.The price of house is also desperate.
About love,frankly 【speaking】,I’ve got nothing to say.I am in love with a girl,but what a pity!it seems to be impossible,for now,at lest.But I don’t care,She should be the only reason 【for me】 to hold on,no matter how【 the world goes on】.If she 【should 】not leave me,I【would】 not abandon 【our love】.
Maybe I need some more time to 【make myself adjusted to all these 】.I am looking forwarding to the promising tomorrow.
说实在的,你写的内容很不错!很真实的反映出了现实生活中的诸多感慨和无奈,思考和坚持,拼搏和坚韧.我由衷的为你的可贵思考和真情流露而赞佩你——这是时代最真实的声音!
祝你开心如意!
再问： 我以前呢英文成绩还是挺好的，只是毕业了好些年，工作上也用不上，所以生疏了。有些表达方式可能不对，我本来的意思是这样的，有些地方大家的理解可能与我有些出入。我中文打出来，大家看看，还有地方能合理点吗？或者改进。
再答： 好的！