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带高3的英语老师进来哈!帮忙看下我写的英语短文, 把我的短文错的地方改一下,再把我写的句子优化下哈,谢谢了,好的话,会追加分的
As we all konwn,we are selfish,that is to say,we never put it on our mind that to help others,in our opinion,it is waste our lifetime absolutely to give somebody a favor.But on the other hand,helping others just means helping ourselves,you know,when you give a flower to somebody,the great smell still remain your hand,you spiril can be promoted.For example,Guo Ming Yi,one of the persons who moved China,is a ordinary worker,now,having been established a union of love consist of a large of people under his leading.And he said ''I'm a ordinary worker,much people have helped me in my lifetime,I just do a few things for them,and helping others means helping ourselves''
As we all konwn,we are selfish,that is to say,we never put it on our mind that to help others,in our opinion,it is waste our lifetime absolutely to give somebody a favor.But on the other hand,helping others just means helping ourselves,you know,when you give a flower to somebody,the great smell still remain your hand,you spiril can be promoted.For example,Guo Ming Yi,one of the persons who moved China,is a ordinary worker,now,having been established a union of love consist of a large of people under his leading.And he said ''I'm a ordinary worker,much people have helped me in my lifetime,I just do a few things for them,and helping others means helping ourselves''
As we all know, people are selfish. That is to say, we never care about others from the bottom of our hearts. Or in another word, it's a waste of time to do someone else favours. On the other hand, helping others is helping ourselves. When you pick a flower and give it to somebody, the incense of the it still remains in your hand and you're making yourself a better person. A good example of it is what Mr. Guo Ming Yi, who just won the award of "moving China" recently, had to say:".".
尽量不改变你的原意,文字上做了一些修饰,有些地方用了不同的表达方法.不保证正确,仅供参考.另外,感觉你此文要表达的中心不够明确.如果你是想表达后半部分所表达的意思,论述似不够充分.
尽量不改变你的原意,文字上做了一些修饰,有些地方用了不同的表达方法.不保证正确,仅供参考.另外,感觉你此文要表达的中心不够明确.如果你是想表达后半部分所表达的意思,论述似不够充分.
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