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求助 ~~写了一份英语系我介绍~希望英语好的朋友们帮忙改一下~~谢谢~
看到有不对的语法 或者有更好的写法都可以帮忙改 ~~谢谢~~
Hello everyone. My name is ., I am very happy to the collective.
I graduated from middle school in . I was born in October. I'm an outgoing boy, I like making friends, my hobby is reading and playing computer, I also like to play basketball.
In the study, I have a weakness, my English is not very good, but I hope that in the future study can improve the level of English, I hope that the teacher and students can help me to improve my English.
大家好, 我的名字是xxx, 我很开心来到这个集体.
我毕业于xxx中学.我出生于10月.我是个外向男孩,我喜欢交朋友,我的爱好是阅读和玩电脑,我也非常喜欢打篮球.
在学习方面我有一个弱项,我的英语不是很好,但是我希望在以后的学习中可以提高的的英语水平,我希望老师和同学可以帮助我提高我的英语成绩.
Hello everyone!My name is ., I am very happy that I can be a part of the collective.
I was graduated from ** middle school . I was born in October. I'm an outgoing boy, and I like making friends, my hobby is reading and playing computer, I also like playing basketball.
And I also have a weakeness that is I am not so good at English, but I hope that in the future I can improve my in English in my daily life's stusy. I hope that you guys can also help me to improve my English.Thank you!