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短文改错Dear Sir / Madam,I’m li hua,a Chinese student taking sum

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短文改错
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m li hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.I’m writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you,I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you .you may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@1236.com;12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
上面打的是对的呀
1.加who处:a Chinese student is taking summer courses in your university这是个完整的句子,I’m lihua也是完整的句子,两句子中间直接不能用逗号连接;修改后的句子是who引导的定语从句修饰a Chinese student ,整个结构充当Lihua的同位语
2.find改found处:and连接并列结构前后时态要一致
3.去of处:have no idear of sth. how to do sth.怎样做 what to do做什么
这句what to use the library语法错误
4.But处:前后转折,需连接词but
5.you改成it处:the Learning Center 是组织机构,非我族类
6.in改成on处:具体时间用介词on
7.加入is处:which day OK with you语法错误,没意义
8.you改成me处:你打电话给我you phone me
9.is改成are处:here后面的谓语由后面的名词决定
10.hear改成hearing处:look forward to sth.
希望对你英语学习有帮助,\(^o^)/~