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求助英语改错Dear Mr.Jackson,I'm Li Hua,a student of Xinhua Middle

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求助英语改错
Dear Mr.Jackson,
I'm Li Hua,a student of Xinhua Middle School.I am writing this letter to thank you returning my losing wallet.
I am glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back.I learned that it was you picked up my wallet and kindly handed it out so quickly.I lost my wallet on my way home from school.What careless I was!With your kind help and honesty,I would still be deep in a sorrow and anxiety.You know,documents such as my ID card and student card is very important to me.
May I invite you for a weekend dinner in return?I am looking forward to receive your reply.
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Dear Mr.Jackson,
I'm Li Hua,a student of Xinhua Middle School.I am writing this letter to thank you (for )returning my (lost) wallet.
I am glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back.I learned that it was you (who )picked up my wallet and kindly handed it (over) so quickly.I lost my wallet on my way home from school.(How )careless I was!( Without) your kind help and honesty,I would still be deep (in sorrow and anxiety).You know,documents such as my ID card and student card (are )very important to me.
May I invite you (to) a weekend dinner in return?I am looking forward to (receiving) your reply.