作业帮英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误
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英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误
I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting
,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my hand was born sense of achievement,how it feels like I'm a real cartoonist.
My father was a shipbuilding workers，now he is live with me.He was very strict
My mother is work in Japan.She is a wonderful cook.I like her dishes very much
I 'm very happiness in this family
那个 一半是网上找的 一半自己写的····= =有错帮忙挑一下····还有不要把对的改成错的= = 无理取闹的人自行离开= =
I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting
,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my hand was born sense of achievement,how it feels like I'm a real cartoonist.
My father was a shipbuilding workers，now he is live with me.He was very strict
My mother is work in Japan.She is a wonderful cook.I like her dishes very much
I 'm very happiness in this family
那个 一半是网上找的 一半自己写的····= =有错帮忙挑一下····还有不要把对的改成错的= = 无理取闹的人自行离开= =
有 我来帮你改一下 but what I like best ts drawing which makes me feel like I'm a real cartoonist workers改为worker he is living with me my mother is working in Japan I'm very happy in this family
再问： 那个为什么不能用happiness
再答： 本句表情态 只能用形容词happy 不能用名词happiness
再问： 那个为什么不能用happiness
再答： 本句表情态 只能用形容词happy 不能用名词happiness