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不是英译中,是这英语表达有问题,需要修改在表达上有问题的句子!
China has witnessed rapid economic development over the past 19 years of reform and opening,with the Chinese economy moving toward the world,which,in turn,is gradually gaining a better understanding of the country.China's existing economic system and ongoing economic development have laid a solid foundation for promoting further exchanges and cooperation with the economies of various countries.
The evolving trend of economic globalization is a distinct characteristic of our time.Facing the new situation of the speedy development of economic globalization and China's accession to the WTO,we like to enhance economic and trade exchanges with all countries in the world under the principle of equality and mutual benefit,friendly consultation and common development,and make concerted efforts to contribute to the development of the world and the prosperity of mankind.
It cannot be denied that there will be significant short-term costs associated with China's accession to the WTO,but much of the costs will have to be incurred any way.China's WTO membership will impose a timetable within which it must deal with its underlying economic problems.WTO membership will not only provide long-term benefits to the Chinese economy,but also help to solve some short-term difficulties.The challenge of the Chinese government is to manage the short-term problems sufficiently skillfully that as time proceeds the longer-term benefits will dwarf the short-term costs.In such a scenario,the WTO deal will only cause isolated nuisances,but not social crises.
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