作业帮请英文高手帮忙检查下文的错误或者有需要改正的地方
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请英文高手帮忙检查下文的错误或者有需要改正的地方
Dear xxxx,
My name is xxxx.Maybe you forget me,but i remember you who was my first foreign teacher.Do you still remember the experience that you taught in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China?
You taught me English when i was a student of junjor 1 in No.1middle school.Now i study in another school ,intending to study further in Ireland.Liking Ireland,i do decide to study there.I like the friendly people,the beautiful scenery,the living atmosphere especially for a song called "craigie hill".
As an Irish,could you tell me something more about your contury?
I'm looking forward to your replay.
Best Regards
xxxx
country 我自己已经发现了错误.其他的呢
Dear xxxx,
My name is xxxx.Maybe you forget me,but i remember you who was my first foreign teacher.Do you still remember the experience that you taught in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China?
You taught me English when i was a student of junjor 1 in No.1middle school.Now i study in another school ,intending to study further in Ireland.Liking Ireland,i do decide to study there.I like the friendly people,the beautiful scenery,the living atmosphere especially for a song called "craigie hill".
As an Irish,could you tell me something more about your contury?
I'm looking forward to your replay.
Best Regards
xxxx
country 我自己已经发现了错误.其他的呢
基本上语法没有错误 但是有几个地方感觉表达不是很地道
如 .Maybe you forget me
i wonder if you remember me.
Do you still remember the experience that you taught in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China
改变为Do you still remember the time you spent in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China
如 .Maybe you forget me
i wonder if you remember me.
Do you still remember the experience that you taught in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China
改变为Do you still remember the time you spent in No.1 middle school,xxx ,China