帮我看看这段英文有没有语法错误,或者需要改正的地方.

帮我看看这段英文有没有语法错误,或者需要改正的地方.
Casual spitting,littering,name-calling.if asked to list all the "what things is it that you can never tolerate" ,there are far more instances than we have just enumertaed.It is time for us to abandon these long-time bad habits.in real life,we need urgently to do some soul-searching and act of correcting,at the same time,we need more righteous and responsible people to step forward and speak no to bad custom.
custome influences each other easily,and has potentially wide inheritance,which is raised to "social custome" later whatever good or bad,and can even develop into the label of behavior of the country of the nation.so forsaking long-time bad habits and restablishing good habits are not simply private affairs.

If you are asked to list all the what things is it that you can never tolerate such as casual spitting,littering,name-calling. There are far more instances than we have just listed.
It is time for us to abandon these long-time bad habits. In real life,we need urgently to do some soul-searching and the act of correcting, at the same time, we need more righteous and responsible people to step forward and speak no to bad custom.
Custom influences each of us easily, and has potentially wide inheritance, which is raised to "social custome" later whatever good or bad, and it can even develop into the label of behavior of the country of the nation. So quitting long-time bad habits and restablishing good habits are not simply private affairs.
再问： If you are asked to list all the what things is it that you can never tolerate such as casual spitting,littering,name-calling. 的you are能不能被省略呢?这里的主体我是想表达we are. 这样是不是会更显得好看点. 更有水平. 另外the what things这样改是不是语法错误了。what应该放在后面引导从句是这样子吗？ 改正habit的话，英语是有用forsake的。 我这里用forsake为什么需要修改？
再答： If we are asked to list all the “what things is it that you can never tolerate” such as casual spitting,littering,name-calling,there are far more instances than we have just listed. 主语前后不一致就应该加上主语 we the what things 开始看你加引号我就没改 以为是固定表达 如果不是的话 可以改成 If we are asked to list all the things that we can never tolerate such as casual spitting,littering,name-calling,there are far more instances than we have just listed. quit 比forsake 常用些
再问： thank you.!