作业帮这个句子是否有语法错误、
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这个句子是否有语法错误、
Hunter is catching up with a fawn.
when I see the frist sunshine the river is going through the forest.
And the light is shotting on the fish.
At this moment,l hear the sound of gun,suddenly and violently.
I put up any head the cloud look like the blood .
suddenly,I can hear a bear coming.
thank you for coming into my room.
Thank you for coming into my life.
so,I will love everday.
Hunter is catching up with a fawn.
when I see the frist sunshine the river is going through the forest.
And the light is shotting on the fish.
At this moment,l hear the sound of gun,suddenly and violently.
I put up any head the cloud look like the blood .
suddenly,I can hear a bear coming.
thank you for coming into my room.
Thank you for coming into my life.
so,I will love everday.
原：I can also exprience the way of how foreigners living.
改：I can also exprience the way how foreigners live.
:)
改：I can also exprience the way how foreigners live.
:)