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初三英语作文My opinion on having lessons at weekendsNowadays,lots

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初三英语作文
My opinion on having lessons at weekends
Nowadays,lots of students have lessons at weekend.But I think it is a waste of time having lessons at weekends.You know ,after five days’ study ,I feel very tired,so nothing can stick in my memory.In my opinion ,I should relax myself at weekends So that we can have enough energy to study in weekdays.Just as a saying goes“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.So l don’t agree to have lessons at weekends.Besides it costs our parents a lot of money.We can study on our own.In brief it is unnecessary for us to go to study at weekends.
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再答: 写文章一般不用“you know” 这种口语,删了。 I don't 是缩写,改成do not 貌似正规一点点 个人觉得用nowaday开头太泛滥了,换个开头会更屌 。 你的倒数第4行和最后一行都是总结的句子, 合并一起吧 ~ 有些生字你可能还没学, 查查字典吧 , 语法都没错啦 Many schools arrange weekend lessons for the students. However, I believe this is not helpful instead; it will only waste our time and energy. After five days of study, as a student I feel very tired. It would be hard to continue studying and memorizing at weekend. I suggest that students should have enough time to relax and rest at weekends. Resting time helps us to regain our energy, so that we can perform better in weekdays. “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy” this saying is so right, we should maintain our life balance. Also, extra lessons cost extra fees from our parents, isn’t it too much? And I prefer to study on my own. Therefore, I do not agree to have lessons at weekends. It is unnecessary for us to go to school at weekends. 其实你本身已经写得很不错 !!你的语法也全对的说! 只不过 本着 要超越 要爆seed的宗旨,才添加了一些链接词,好让句子更连贯 ~