作业帮帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么
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帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么
My School Life Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I listen to the teachers carefully in class,and I often ask questions.I enjoy answering the teachers' questions.I do my homework in the evening. I take an active part in all kinds of activities.I play football and basketball after school with my friends.I read books in the school library.I talk with my teachers and classmates after class.What a happy life we have at school!
My School Life Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I listen to the teachers carefully in class,and I often ask questions.I enjoy answering the teachers' questions.I do my homework in the evening. I take an active part in all kinds of activities.I play football and basketball after school with my friends.I read books in the school library.I talk with my teachers and classmates after class.What a happy life we have at school!
没啥大的语病,可是就一个字烂.典型的流水账作文（而且时间谁许还有点紊乱）,不过表哭,可能是小朋友你年纪还小吧.下面是我帮你修改的作文,觉得好就选我为满意回答吧.
The life in this school is seen by me the most valuable and interesting experience.First of all,I like the warm hugging of the brilliant sunshine every morning when I am walking to school,it gives me energy and courage to overcome the challenges in the rest of the day.And during the self-study in the morning,I enjoy reading aloud,that helps me to immerse in the context of books which I find out to be an extremely effective way to remember stuff.Moreover,I think getting alone with my teachers and classmates is enjoyable since my teachers are all very patient and wiling to help me out with any questions I have,and my classmates are really friendly because they always share their stories with me.Lastly,the after-school activities I take part in are very memorable experience for me.You know I really don't want to be a nurd who only knows to study all the time,so I join the sport club and plays football and basketball there.Those activities not only improve my fitness,but also teach me something new,something that I can't learn from my daily classes,those includes the sense of leadership,fair paly ,etc.To sum up,the school life is really meaningful for me and I will never forget it.
The life in this school is seen by me the most valuable and interesting experience.First of all,I like the warm hugging of the brilliant sunshine every morning when I am walking to school,it gives me energy and courage to overcome the challenges in the rest of the day.And during the self-study in the morning,I enjoy reading aloud,that helps me to immerse in the context of books which I find out to be an extremely effective way to remember stuff.Moreover,I think getting alone with my teachers and classmates is enjoyable since my teachers are all very patient and wiling to help me out with any questions I have,and my classmates are really friendly because they always share their stories with me.Lastly,the after-school activities I take part in are very memorable experience for me.You know I really don't want to be a nurd who only knows to study all the time,so I join the sport club and plays football and basketball there.Those activities not only improve my fitness,but also teach me something new,something that I can't learn from my daily classes,those includes the sense of leadership,fair paly ,etc.To sum up,the school life is really meaningful for me and I will never forget it.