作业帮请求帮忙改改我写的一篇英语作文!
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请求帮忙改改我写的一篇英语作文!
看图作文,有附图,作文如下：
The picture presents to us that a thin and weak tree is filled with many parent's hope,such as the Mathematics Olympaid gold madel,the first place honor and excellent achievement.Besides,many parents are surrounded with the tree and take care of it .But the tree is lack of leaves,and the branchs are bent.
This kind of phenomenon is not unusual in our socity.More and more parents press too much preasure onto their children.They except that their children will be the best at studying,but they usually ignore children's feeling.
Because of that,children may lose time to play with their friends in the nice age,and they also may lack for life ability.
From my point of view,I think parents should give more freedom to their children,and not press too much hope onto their children's mind.I sincerely hope all the children will grow happily and heathy!
写的不好,但是希望能帮忙改改!可以纠正语法错误和修改下句子
图片大意就是很多家长围着这棵树 树上有很多奖牌啊什么的 地下一排字是“家长的希望”
看图作文,有附图,作文如下：
The picture presents to us that a thin and weak tree is filled with many parent's hope,such as the Mathematics Olympaid gold madel,the first place honor and excellent achievement.Besides,many parents are surrounded with the tree and take care of it .But the tree is lack of leaves,and the branchs are bent.
This kind of phenomenon is not unusual in our socity.More and more parents press too much preasure onto their children.They except that their children will be the best at studying,but they usually ignore children's feeling.
Because of that,children may lose time to play with their friends in the nice age,and they also may lack for life ability.
From my point of view,I think parents should give more freedom to their children,and not press too much hope onto their children's mind.I sincerely hope all the children will grow happily and heathy!
写的不好,但是希望能帮忙改改!可以纠正语法错误和修改下句子
图片大意就是很多家长围着这棵树 树上有很多奖牌啊什么的 地下一排字是“家长的希望”
我基本重写了一遍.思路没变、就把句型改了改,有看不懂的可以问我.最近在写research essay,可能有些忙 但是我会尽快回复你的.
As the picture suggested,a thin and weak tree is overloaded with medals and achievements; many people take care of it,for they want it to become as good as they want it to be.However,its leaves are scarce,branches are bent.
The tree in this picture symbolizes children nowadays,and the people,parents.This phenomenon is quite common in our society; many parents have hoped too much off their children,expecting them to be the best at everything,but cared so less about how the children feel.
As a result,children were wiped off from the playgrounds,and unable to enjoy a childhood that originally meant for freedom.Moreover,since they were forced to focus on study,many abilities of life could not be learnt.
In my opinion,parents should provide the children with more freedom and lesser pressure.I sincerely hope that all the children can grow up with jovial memories and healthy bodies.
如果觉得不错就给个分吧,
As the picture suggested,a thin and weak tree is overloaded with medals and achievements; many people take care of it,for they want it to become as good as they want it to be.However,its leaves are scarce,branches are bent.
The tree in this picture symbolizes children nowadays,and the people,parents.This phenomenon is quite common in our society; many parents have hoped too much off their children,expecting them to be the best at everything,but cared so less about how the children feel.
As a result,children were wiped off from the playgrounds,and unable to enjoy a childhood that originally meant for freedom.Moreover,since they were forced to focus on study,many abilities of life could not be learnt.
In my opinion,parents should provide the children with more freedom and lesser pressure.I sincerely hope that all the children can grow up with jovial memories and healthy bodies.
如果觉得不错就给个分吧,
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