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英语菜鸟作文一篇,帮我改改
2004年江苏卷
假如你是李晓华,住在江城.你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡江城的情况.请你用英语写一封回信.回信须包括下表中的内容.
自然情况
①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就
②经济发展迅速
③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等.
④水、空气污染
⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法
⑥（内容由考生自己拟定）
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名.
2．词数100左右.信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入词数.
参考词汇：经济economy n
It gives me pleasure to receive your kind letter.I have honor to tell you about my hometown.here is something about it.
jiangcheng is a famous city in china.in this city you can find the changjiang rever besides,and the view is beauty.most importantly,it is very convenient to live.
in the past year ,it builds a lot of favtory,and other big bulidings.it made economy develops quickly,it also made the water and gas pullution.
there is nothing disadvantages but the traffic jam ,i think.it's a wonderful city,i always look forward to see the new change of the city.
we look forward to you reply at you earliest convenience.
2004年江苏卷
假如你是李晓华,住在江城.你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡江城的情况.请你用英语写一封回信.回信须包括下表中的内容.
自然情况
①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就
②经济发展迅速
③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等.
④水、空气污染
⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法
⑥（内容由考生自己拟定）
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名.
2．词数100左右.信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入词数.
参考词汇：经济economy n
It gives me pleasure to receive your kind letter.I have honor to tell you about my hometown.here is something about it.
jiangcheng is a famous city in china.in this city you can find the changjiang rever besides,and the view is beauty.most importantly,it is very convenient to live.
in the past year ,it builds a lot of favtory,and other big bulidings.it made economy develops quickly,it also made the water and gas pullution.
there is nothing disadvantages but the traffic jam ,i think.it's a wonderful city,i always look forward to see the new change of the city.
we look forward to you reply at you earliest convenience.
长江用yangtse river 比较好.beauty改成beautiful,用形容词.to live改成to live in.it builts...develop quickly 改成there have been built lots of factories and high buildings that make the economy develop quickly. however,there are also many pollutions at the same time,for example,the water pollution and gas pollution. except for the heavy traffic jam, the city is wonderful. i am looking forward to seeing the new changes of...
we are looking forward to your.
we are looking forward to your.