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急啊!高中英语改错题! 请各位帮帮忙!不胜感激

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急啊!高中英语改错题! 请各位帮帮忙!不胜感激
Dear editor :
My father works in a office.He is a pleasant person( 1 )
and worked hard.Two years ago,He got into the habit( 2 )
of smoking,Since then my mother have been worrying( 3 )
about his health.He smokes as much as five cigarettes( 4 )
every day.Many times i try to persuade him give up( 5 )
smoking.I tell him about the harm what smoking does( 6 )
to a person and to the nonsmokers around them.Though( 7 )
he agrees with me on the matter,but he says it is hard( 8 )
to stop smoking.He smokes so heavily an before.I don't( 9 )
know what to do about it( 10 )
(1)a office -> an office(a和an的用法)
(2)workd -> works(一般时态)
(3)worring(令人担心的) -> worried(担心)
(4)much(+不可数名词) -> more(+可数名词)
(5)him ^ give up -> him to give up(persuade sb to do sth)
(6)what -> that(引导定语从句,从句不缺成分,不用what)
(7)them -> him(指代 a persn,单数)
(8)but -> \(去掉,前文有though了,不再用but)
(9)so heavily as(书写错误) -> as heavily as(肯定句中用as…as…,否定句so…as…)
(10)对