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这个短文中有什么问题吗 语法之类的

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这个短文中有什么问题吗 语法之类的
Hello David,my name is Li Hua,live in China's Shanghai,where do you live?Nice to meet you!I am a student,are you there?I like collecting stamps,I have a lot of precious stamps,can let you have a look,I also like sports,very play basketball,running,swimming,mountain climbing and I are very good,and I have great skiing,I think you should love.I also like English,now a lot of English songs,hope we can become good friends
第一行live 改为living,因为作非谓语成分;where do you live?前不应用逗号,最好改为and you?; Nice to meet you! I am a student, are you there? 句子不应用逗号隔开因为有两个谓语; I like collecting stamps, I have a lot of precious stamps 句子不应用逗号隔开因为有两个谓语; can let you have a look,缺主语;I also like sports, very play basketball, running, swimming, mountain climbing and I are very good,very改为especially,play 改为playing,are 改为am;总之这篇文章大错特错,简直误人子弟……
再问: 按你那个改就对了吗?还有其他地方错误吗?谢谢