作业帮帮忙改一下我的英语作文
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帮忙改一下我的英语作文
I had a great time in Beijing .And we enjoyed the trip very much .We arrived by train on Sunday .And on Monday we visited the Tian'anmen Square and the BeiHai Park .Then onTuesday we went to the Forbidden City .It is very great.The next day ,we walked up the Great Wall .It is very long.The last day,we went to Wangfujing to buy some presents for our friends .The journey was very short but it was very interesting .
I had a great time in Beijing .And we enjoyed the trip very much .We arrived by train on Sunday .And on Monday we visited the Tian'anmen Square and the BeiHai Park .Then onTuesday we went to the Forbidden City .It is very great.The next day ,we walked up the Great Wall .It is very long.The last day,we went to Wangfujing to buy some presents for our friends .The journey was very short but it was very interesting .
语法大致通顺但作文结构不很理想
I had a great time in Beijing .Overall,we enjoyed the trip very much .We arrived by train on Sunday .On Monday,we visited the Tian'anmen Square and BeiHai Park .Then,on Tuesday,we went to the Forbidden City which was very great.The next day ,we walked up the very long Great Wall.The last day,we went to Wangfujing to buy some presents for our friends .The journey was very short but it was very interesting .
I had a great time in Beijing .Overall,we enjoyed the trip very much .We arrived by train on Sunday .On Monday,we visited the Tian'anmen Square and BeiHai Park .Then,on Tuesday,we went to the Forbidden City which was very great.The next day ,we walked up the very long Great Wall.The last day,we went to Wangfujing to buy some presents for our friends .The journey was very short but it was very interesting .