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This year's summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside， where I saw mountains fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village， the water in which was quite clear.I am used to getting up early in the morning breathing the fresh air and listening to the birds singing and enjoying the green trees red flowers and the river. I like fishing with my friends.We are in the countryside in the woods adventure.
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This year's summer vacation was the most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside， where I saw mountain fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village.The water was quite clear.I was used to getting up early in the morning so that I could breathe the fresh air , listen to the birds singing and enjoying the green trees ,red flowers and the clear river. I liked fishing with my friends.We could also adventure in the jungle. It is a special experience. I miss the river, the air, the birds, and my dear friends. I am looking forward to my following summer holidays.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
This year's summer vacation was the most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside， where I saw mountain fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village.The water was quite clear.I was used to getting up early in the morning so that I could breathe the fresh air , listen to the birds singing and enjoying the green trees ,red flowers and the clear river. I liked fishing with my friends.We could also adventure in the jungle. It is a special experience. I miss the river, the air, the birds, and my dear friends. I am looking forward to my following summer holidays.
最终答案：略