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This is my Hello,my name is Zhao Chenyu.Zhao is my family name;Chenyu is my first name. I’m 12. I like green.And you?My telephone is 13053873022.
解题思路： 个别地方用词不准确。
解题过程：
红体字是需要修改的地方：
This is me
Hello,my name is Zhao Chenyu.Zhao is my family name. Chenyu is my first name.
I’m 12 . I like green.And you? My telephone number is 13053873022.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
红体字是需要修改的地方：
This is me
Hello,my name is Zhao Chenyu.Zhao is my family name. Chenyu is my first name.
I’m 12 . I like green.And you? My telephone number is 13053873022.
最终答案：略