怎么写这篇作文的缩写啊She said helping others changed her life

怎么写这篇作文的缩写啊She said helping others changed her life
She said helping others changed her life.
Teaching high school students in a poor mountain village in Gansu Province may not sound like fun to you.However,it the life of Yang Lei from Beijing.The Peking University graduate first went there as a volunteer on a one-year program.The program was started by the Ministry of Education and the Chinese Young pioneers.Every year they send 100 volunteers to teach in China’s rural areas.
Life in the was a new experience for Yang Lei.Her village was 2,000 meters above sea level,and at first the thin air made her feel sick.The food was very simple----teachers ate porridge three times a day.Fortunately,Yang Lei’s mother with her.She said that both she and her husband thought this was a good idea.“Young people today need to experience things,” she said.
Most of the pupils live in school dormitories.They
work very hard.They get up at 5am and read books
until 11pm.They love having the volunteer teachers
there.“There is no difference between you and
them,” says yang Lei.“They say that we are like big
or sisters to them,and they feel lucky.”
Some of the students may not be able to go to senior high school or college.Families are poor and there often isn’t money for education.“I can’t do anything about that,” says Yang lei,“but I can open up my students’ eyes to the outside and give them a good start in life.” She said she likes being a good influence in the children’s lives.
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As a Perking University graduate and volunteer,Yang Lei is now teaching high school students in a poor mountain village in Gansu Province.
It is not easy for her to live though the early days.As the village was 2,000 meters above sea level,the thin air makes her feel sick.And the food is only porridge.However,both she and her husband think it's a good idea to stay there.Most of the pupils live in the dormitories and study very hard.They love volunteer teachers there because they're just like elder sisters to them.
Lacking of money,some of the students may not able to go to senior high school or college.Yang lei says that she can't change the poverty but she will do everything she can to change the children's lives.
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