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求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题、

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求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题、
When I was a smallboy ,My parents have gone to big cities for work .Both my grandmother and Ihave lived in the countryside till now ,Very few people once asked me about mystudies,which has contributed to the fact that I possess the strong abilitiesof dealing with things independently小时候我的父母到大城市打工,我和奶奶生活在农村,直到现在,也很少有人过问我的学习,因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力.
帮我看看语法错没错谢谢啦
你这个的话,最好用过去式,When I was a small boy , My parents went to a big citie(一个人不可能同时去多个城市的,如果父母去的是不同城市的话,就要换一种表述了) for work . I lived with my grandmother in the countryside. Very few people once cared about(这里你想用的是关心、在意吧) me about my studies, which contributed to the fact that I possess the strong abilities of dealing with things independently
再问: 请再检查下语法有无问题谢谢、没问题的话就采纳了谢谢~cared about me about my studies,没问题吗?读起来有点别扭。。。
再答: Very few people once cared about(这里你想用的是关心、在意吧)my studies。 恩,care about 直接接关心的事物就可以