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求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题~

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求英语大神看看这句话有没有语法问题~
when i was young my parents worked in the big city, they left me to my grandma, grandma and i lived in the countryside. still till now, few people ever asked or cared about my study, so now i am very capable of doing things independently.
小时候我的父母到大城市打工,我和奶奶生活在农村,直到现在,也很少有人过问我的学习,因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力.
求看看语法是否正确~可、或者可否改进一下
大二以下水平勿扰谢谢
小时候我的父母到大城市打工,我和奶奶生活在农村,直到现在,也很少有人过问我的学习,因此我有着很强的独立做事的能力.
(1) When I was a small boy , My parents have gone to big cities for work . Both my grandmother and I have lived in the countryside till now , Very few people once asked me about my studies, which has contributed to the fact that I possess the strong abilities of dealing with things independently.
(2) My parents have gone to big cities to work since my childhood (I was so young), I was always taken care of by my grandmoter in the countryside . Up to now /So far, Few people care much about my studies . that is why I have been so strong in the aspect of solving the problems independently.
(3) My parents have both worked in big cities since I was a small boy , I have lived with my grandmother in the countryside , So far. few people has cared much about my studies, which has made it happen that I formed the strong capabilities of working on problems alone /by myself / on my own / independently.
(4) My parents worked in big cities during my childhood, I was left / entrusted / committed to my grandmother's care . Up to now, few people is mindful about my studies , that is why I am in high competence of dealing with various things independently / on my own /alone / by myself