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说明：从部门经理（Rush Crawford)的名义给公司全体员工发一份内部通知.
时间：2007年6月24日
事由：有关更换电话系统事宜
内容：
1.由于业务需要,公司拟更心目前使用的电话系统;
2.现由3个通讯公司提交的更新方案,内容见附件；
3.请员工仔细阅读并提交自己的建议；
4.提交建议的时间：本月底前；
5.公司将与下月初订货.
words for reference:事由 Re 更新 update 附件 attachment
订货 place an order 通讯公司 communications company
Memo
To：All staff Employees
From：__________
Re:_____________
Date:___________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Memo
To:All staff Empolyees
From:Rush crawford
Re:About update the telephone system
Date:June,24,2007
Because of the need in business,company plan to update the telephone system.Now there is a communications company hand in a update plan.The detail please see attachment.Please the workers reading carefully and give sugestions.And the time by the end of this month.The company will place an order at next month early.
说明：从部门经理（Rush Crawford)的名义给公司全体员工发一份内部通知.
时间：2007年6月24日
事由：有关更换电话系统事宜
内容：
1.由于业务需要,公司拟更心目前使用的电话系统;
2.现由3个通讯公司提交的更新方案,内容见附件；
3.请员工仔细阅读并提交自己的建议；
4.提交建议的时间：本月底前；
5.公司将与下月初订货.
words for reference:事由 Re 更新 update 附件 attachment
订货 place an order 通讯公司 communications company
Memo
To：All staff Employees
From：__________
Re:_____________
Date:___________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Memo
To:All staff Empolyees
From:Rush crawford
Re:About update the telephone system
Date:June,24,2007
Because of the need in business,company plan to update the telephone system.Now there is a communications company hand in a update plan.The detail please see attachment.Please the workers reading carefully and give sugestions.And the time by the end of this month.The company will place an order at next month early.
前面这么说都行.只改正文：
Because of the need in business,the company's planning to update the telephone system.Three commnunications companies have submitted plans,please see attachment files for details.Please read them carefully and give suggestions by the end of this month.The company will place an order early next month.
Because of the need in business,the company's planning to update the telephone system.Three commnunications companies have submitted plans,please see attachment files for details.Please read them carefully and give suggestions by the end of this month.The company will place an order early next month.