作业帮一篇初一英语水平的作文,
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一篇初一英语水平的作文,
请大家帮我批改一下这篇作文：
MY FAVORITE PET
I like many pets,like dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I very love it,because it can make me happy,Its name is Beibei.It has white fur.I feed vegetables to the rabbit.It never eats meat.Rabbits are peaple's good friends.
My favorite pet are rabbits.How about yours?Tell me now!
也请大家顺便帮我写一篇关于喜欢音乐的英语作文,60字左右,
请大家帮我批改一下这篇作文：
MY FAVORITE PET
I like many pets,like dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I very love it,because it can make me happy,Its name is Beibei.It has white fur.I feed vegetables to the rabbit.It never eats meat.Rabbits are peaple's good friends.
My favorite pet are rabbits.How about yours?Tell me now!
也请大家顺便帮我写一篇关于喜欢音乐的英语作文,60字左右,
有错误的地方,适当的给你修改一下,并且帮你加一些好的语句吧
改正：MY FAVORITE PET
I like some pets,such as dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I love it very much,because it can make me happy.Its name is Beibei.It has white fur and two long ears ,it looks very lovely.I feed vegetables to the rabbit and it never eats meat.Rabbits are peoples' good friends.
I like rabbits best.Do you think them cute How about yours Please tell me some about your favorite ainimals now!
改正：MY FAVORITE PET
I like some pets,such as dogs,cats,fish and rabbits.But my favorite pet is a rabbit.
This rabbit is my pet.I love it very much,because it can make me happy.Its name is Beibei.It has white fur and two long ears ,it looks very lovely.I feed vegetables to the rabbit and it never eats meat.Rabbits are peoples' good friends.
I like rabbits best.Do you think them cute How about yours Please tell me some about your favorite ainimals now!