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During 1912 for England has a very intelligent boy his name is Abner.He is 12 years old boy,but he have a big mistake he like make fun with people,and didn't like help people.For example he make fun with a boy,said you are stupid,I smart than you,and you need go to the school because you are stupid,I don't need go school because I am intelligent.Abner didn't need go to the school because he smart than every doctor for world.During one day Abner go to the library,he didn't need go to the library ,because he saw any book of this world,but he saw a book he didn't saw this book before,and this book called "Time Machine".This book is about the time machine,many person want make the time machine,but all the person who want time machine is be defeated.Abner think he is a smart person,he think he can make a time machine.He spend his time and money,half year and $100,000.And Abner finish the time machine,the time machine look likes a whale,but is a baby whale,color is yellow,a very beautiful time machine,Abner want his anything is 100%.And he start operate the time machine,this time a shiny light was around the time machine,and Abner and time machine was die way.
"Oh my gods!What happened with here?" said Abner.
He saw a very different world,person fly at sky,some the house located at the cloud,some the house is underground,and some the house is underwater.So on so on.Many person is look at him,they think here have a savage.This time a girl walk with him and eat a candy.
"Where you came from." said that girl.
"I came to 1912 England." said Abner.
"1912?It is so early,here is England but it is 9999.Flow me." said that girl.
Abner was flow her and they sit at the park.She tell her the many thing about 9999,and many thing about her self.Her name is Edwina Magic.9999 is a very advanced world,person can fly one the sky,animal can talk,and right know she was use translate candy to talk to me.Abner didn't know the world can be so advanced.
"How can I go back the England 1912." said Abner.
"How do you come from?" said Edwina.
"Time machine." said Abner.
"Time machine?Will if you want go back you should have time pass,and time pass need a very smart person can get,time pass is in the time policy." said Edwina.
"Where is time policy?" Abner asked.
"Follow me." said Edwina.
And then they go to the time policy.Abner is very surprise because time policy is on the sky,and Edwina use a 9999 machine help Abner go to the time policy.The time policeman tell they if he want get time pass,Abner should get a test.And the test is started.The first part is very easy for Abner but the last part is not.Abner can't smart any more.
So Abner go back the 9999 and npt smart ant more.
During 1912 in England there was a very intelligent boy,his name was Abner.He was 12- year-old boy,but he had a big mistake that he likes making fun with people,and he didn't like help people.For example he maked fun with a boy,said " you are stupid,I am smart than you,and you need go to the school because you are stupid,I don't need go school because I am intelligent." Abner didn't need go to the school because he smart than every doctor for world.During one day Abner went to the library,he didn't need go to the library ,because he saw any book of this world,but he saw a book he didn't saw the book before,and the book called "Time Machine".This book was about the time machine,many person wanted to make the time machine,but all the person who want time machine are defeated.Abner thought he was a smart person,he thought he could make a time machine.He spent his time and money,half year and $100,000 on it .And Abner finished the time machine,the time machine looked likes a whale,but thebaby whale's color was yellow,a very beautiful time machine,Abner wanted his anything is 100%.And he started operating the time machine,this time a shiny light was around the time machine,and Abner and time machine was die way.
"Oh my gods!What happened with here?" said Abner.
He saw a very different world,person fly at sky,some houses locate at the cloud,some houses are underground,and some houses are underwater.and so on.Many person are looking at him,they thought here had a savage.This time a girl was walking with him and eating a candy.
"Where you came from." said that girl.
"I came to 1912 England." said Abner.
"1912?It is so early,here is England but it is 9999.Follow me." said that girl.
Abner was follow her and they sit in the park.She told him her things about 9999,and many things about herself.Her name was Edwina Magic.9999 is a very advanced world,person can fly one the sky,animal can talk,and right know she was use translate candy to talk to me.Abner didn't know the world can be so advanced.
"How can I go back the England 1912." said Abner.
"How do you come from?" said Edwina.
"Time machine." said Abner.
"Time machine?Will if you want go back you should have time pass,and time pass need a very smart person can get,time pass is in the time policy." said Edwina.
"Where is time policy?" Abner asked.
"Follow me." said Edwina.
And then they went to the time policy.Abner was very surprise because time policy was on the sky,and Edwina used a 9999 machine helping Abner go to the time policy.The time policeman told them that if he want get time pass,Abner should get a test.And the test was started.The first part was very easy for Abner but the last part was not.Abner couldn't smart any more.
So Abner went back the 9999 and npt smart ant more.