作业帮麻烦帮我看下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错?
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麻烦帮我看下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错?
My name is Cathy.I’m thirteen years old .I learned from Chang Yi primary school .In the primary school ,I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .I’m a clever girl .I like to read books and sing songs .I like to study.Because it can give me much knowledge .This is me.
(有的话帮我改一下,
My name is Cathy.I’m thirteen years old .I learned from Chang Yi primary school .In the primary school ,I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .I’m a clever girl .I like to read books and sing songs .I like to study.Because it can give me much knowledge .This is me.
(有的话帮我改一下,
I learned from Chang Yi primary school .
语法是对的,但说起来有点别扭,建议改成：
I am study in the Chang Yi primary school.
I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .
还是很别扭,不知道是不是译成了中式英语,建议改成：
All the teachers think I am a good student.
I like to read books and sing songs .建议改成：
My hobby is reading books and singing songs.
I like to study.建议改成：I like studying.
语法是对的,但说起来有点别扭,建议改成：
I am study in the Chang Yi primary school.
I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .
还是很别扭,不知道是不是译成了中式英语,建议改成：
All the teachers think I am a good student.
I like to read books and sing songs .建议改成：
My hobby is reading books and singing songs.
I like to study.建议改成：I like studying.