作业帮短文改错,共有10处语言错误
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短文改错,共有10处语言错误
When my twentieth birthday came,I was not out home.In order to celebrate so important day with my parent,I wrote a letter.In the letter I thanked them for having raised me for twenty years,and express my love for them.Later my mother told me she read the letter,tears filled with her eyes.But my father appeared much cooler.He read it alone carefully,but then he put the letter away.I can imagine the scene clear because I know my father very much.Be a man with few words,he prefers to show his love in silent way.
When my twentieth birthday came,I was not out home.In order to celebrate so important day with my parent,I wrote a letter.In the letter I thanked them for having raised me for twenty years,and express my love for them.Later my mother told me she read the letter,tears filled with her eyes.But my father appeared much cooler.He read it alone carefully,but then he put the letter away.I can imagine the scene clear because I know my father very much.Be a man with few words,he prefers to show his love in silent way.
1.out---at
2.day前加a
3.parent改为parents
4.express---expressed
5.for---to
6.tears前加with
7.but then---and then
8.clear---clearly
9.Be---Being
10.with---of
11.silent前加a
2.day前加a
3.parent改为parents
4.express---expressed
5.for---to
6.tears前加with
7.but then---and then
8.clear---clearly
9.Be---Being
10.with---of
11.silent前加a