作业帮2014年6月大学英语四级第一套作文求批改
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2014年6月大学英语四级第一套作文求批改
题目是外国朋友来你的家乡玩,你会带他去哪里,为什么.
I'm from a very beautiful city,ZhouShan,it beside the East China Sea.
If my foreign friend is coming to visit my hometown,I think he will love the city.I'll take him to the Putuo Mountain,a great number of people come to the mountain to call on Buddhas every year.Zhujiajian is also a good place to visit.He can see the vast sea,fabulous fishermen paintings,and what's more,delicious seafood,like crabs ,fishes,etc.All of them are very fresh,I think he will be fond of them.And maybe I'll take him to the Haishan Park.It is a historic tourist attraction.There was a war between the government of the Qing Dynasty and the british government.In the other word ,it had seen the Opium Wars many years ago,and then people built the park to honor the dead soldiers.
He can eat delicious food,sea beautiful views and honor the history,it will be a funny tourist.
请帮我指出这篇作文的不足和错误,提一些建议,
题目是外国朋友来你的家乡玩,你会带他去哪里,为什么.
I'm from a very beautiful city,ZhouShan,it beside the East China Sea.
If my foreign friend is coming to visit my hometown,I think he will love the city.I'll take him to the Putuo Mountain,a great number of people come to the mountain to call on Buddhas every year.Zhujiajian is also a good place to visit.He can see the vast sea,fabulous fishermen paintings,and what's more,delicious seafood,like crabs ,fishes,etc.All of them are very fresh,I think he will be fond of them.And maybe I'll take him to the Haishan Park.It is a historic tourist attraction.There was a war between the government of the Qing Dynasty and the british government.In the other word ,it had seen the Opium Wars many years ago,and then people built the park to honor the dead soldiers.
He can eat delicious food,sea beautiful views and honor the history,it will be a funny tourist.
请帮我指出这篇作文的不足和错误,提一些建议,
I come from a very beautiful city namely ZhouShan,it is located next to the East China Sea.I believe if any of my foreign friends visited this place,they would certainly fall in love with my hometown.There are few beautiful spots such as Zhuiiaiian and Putuo Mountain attract quite a number of people.Many followers to Putuo Mountain worship and pray for good health and good wealth for their families every year.Zhujiajian is also a good place to visit,despite of the great scenery and a vast expanse of blue sea,you may see fabulous fishermen are paintings along the sea shore and you may also taste variety of freshness seafood at here.Of course,not forgetting about the Haishan Park,a historical tourist spot which was ever witnessed a horrible war between the Qing Dynasty governor and British military.This is known as the battle field of the Opium Wars many years ago.There were thousand of souls and martyrs were sacrificed in the battle.In order to commemorate the veterans,the local government worked together with some associations raised a fund to build this Memorial Park to honor the courage of the dead soldiers.
In a simple word,I am sure whoever has been to ZhouShan will definitely agree with me that it is a beautiful city with all kinds of delicious seafood and it has a natural horizon as well as a fascinating scenery where all tourist should not be missed.
In a simple word,I am sure whoever has been to ZhouShan will definitely agree with me that it is a beautiful city with all kinds of delicious seafood and it has a natural horizon as well as a fascinating scenery where all tourist should not be missed.