作业帮请帮我看看这三句英文哪里能改改的,
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请帮我看看这三句英文哪里能改改的,
-For some underground workrooms which have no ventilators,air-conditioningequipments must be installed.
-In addition ,if the conditions permit,sports facilities are ideal for staffs to do exercise in the intervals of businese.
-these are done to protect the health of the workforce from hazards in the work environment
Secondly,reasonable timetableis also important for employee’s health.
-For some underground workrooms which have no ventilators,air-conditioningequipments must be installed.
-In addition ,if the conditions permit,sports facilities are ideal for staffs to do exercise in the intervals of businese.
-these are done to protect the health of the workforce from hazards in the work environment
Secondly,reasonable timetableis also important for employee’s health.
-For some underground workrooms ,which have no ventilators,air-conditioningequipments must be installed.
which前加逗号,因为是非限定定语
-In addition ,if the conditions permit,sports facilities are ideal for staffs to do exerciseS in the intervals of businese.
do exercises 要复数
-these are done to protect the health of the workforce from hazards in the work environment
Secondly,a reasonable timetable is also important for employee’s health.
timetable 可数名词,前面要加冠词
which前加逗号,因为是非限定定语
-In addition ,if the conditions permit,sports facilities are ideal for staffs to do exerciseS in the intervals of businese.
do exercises 要复数
-these are done to protect the health of the workforce from hazards in the work environment
Secondly,a reasonable timetable is also important for employee’s health.
timetable 可数名词,前面要加冠词