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英语改错 急My hometown is a beautiful place, which stands beside

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英语改错 急
My hometown is a beautiful place, which stands beside a wide river and is rich of fish and rice beside a wide river and is rich of fish and rice. but in the old day it was just a poor and backward small town and many people lived a hard life with work .My hometown liberated in 1949. Since then great changes have been taken place in my hometown. the streets have been widened. Moreover, factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas or theatres have sprung up one after another. The people’s life has been great improved. I love my working hard to makeing it richer and more beautifel.
第1行.of 改in 第2行. day改为days 第3行 liberated改为被动was liberated
第4行 have been taken place改为主动 have taken plac 第5行 or改为 and
第6行great改为greatly
最后一句你可能有打错的字:I love to work hard to make it richer and more beautiful.
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