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英语改错 不给出解析的不采纳 每一个都要解析
Dear Sally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this 76.________
summer vacation,in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.77.________
The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this 78.________
holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.79.________
I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for 80.________
the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,but now I’ll never 81.________
waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how 82.________
to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working 83.________
and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from 84.________
textbooks.All these will be good for my future.In the word,I had a 85.________
wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Bing
76 没错 this term/morning/afternoon 前面不用加介词
77 like -> as,work as 充当/担当什么职位
78 tired-> tiring 工作让人疲惫的
79 was -> is 时态一致 后面是现在完成时态 前面用一般现在时态
80 for-> for 去掉 support 及物动词
81 ask-> asking keep on doing sth
82 parent-> parents 父母 用复数
83 worse ->more what's worse更糟糕的是与上下文不符合 what's more 更重要的是
84 something ->something that that在后面做主语不能省略
85 the -> a in a word 总之 固定词组