Telecommunication as a Great Facilitator to Our Life

Telecommunication as a Great Facilitator to Our Life
要求内容：1.电信业发展的现状.
2.发展电信的优点.
3.电信发展的负面效果.

四六级水平的么 那么字数大概在120—150吧?
另外啰嗦一下 拜托LZ下次把要求写全点 要什么水平的 要写多少字的 ……
我不是每次都能猜的这么准的……
还有呢 说到四六级作文 必要的长难句和复杂的词汇肯定要有的,都是加分的亮点,用模板也可以,但是要有新意.一楼的开头虽然是模板的写法,却是被人用烂了的~句式和单词也未免有点小儿科 两个重复的become看着刺眼无比……
全文如下：
It is no exaggeration to say that telecommunication has become an integral segment(核心部分) of communication in contemporary society(当代社会).The booming popularity and great influence are causing wide concern and a subject of intense debate.This essay is to analysis the pros and cons of the development of telecommunication.
One benefit is that telecommunication makes a change of the methodologies that individuals contact with each other.Originate from the ancient time,face to face talking and postal service are major methods of communication and the spreading of information ,compared to that,modern citizens are in favor of calling and sending texts and emails when contact to others.It is obvious to see that people can be benefited from this trend as a great booming in the efficiency and convince.In addition,people can choose their favorite in diverse types of communication,which means that the expense of communication can be decreased by selecting a proper way.
However,it is also true that there are some harmful impacts in terms of the growth of telecommunication,for example,media,one of the standard in the field of telecommunication,has become to increasingly broadcast the violent and sexual programme as the high audience rating,however,the increase of violent and other antisocial acts can be contributed to higher crime rate.
In conclusion,although the challenges presented by the booming telecommunication industry are numerous and complex,in my opinion,the benefits will continue outweigh its drawbacks.
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再答： 改过之后的，你再测测，应该有90分以上 It is no exaggeration to say that telecommunication has become an integral segment of communication in contemporary society. The booming popularity and great influence has received a subject of debate. This essay is going to analyse the pros and cons of the development of telecommunication. One benefit is that telecommunication makes a change of the methodologies that individuals contact each other. Originating from the ancient time, face to face talking and postal service are major methods of communication and the spreading of information , compared to that, modern citizens are in favor of calling and sending texts and emails when contact to others. It is obvious to see that people can be benefited from this trend as a great booming in the efficiency and convince. In addition, people can choose their favorite in diverse types of communication, which means that the expense of communication can be decreased by selecting a proper method. However, on the negative side, it cannot be denied that there are some drawbacks in terms of the growth of telecommunication, for example, media, one of the standard in the field of telecommunication, has increasingly broadcasted the violent and sexual programme as the high audience rating, however, the increase of violent and other antisocial behaviors can contribute to higher crime rate. In conclusion, although the challenges presented by the booming telecommunication industry are numerous and complex, in my opinion, the benefits will continue outweigh its drawbacks.