英语翻译最好是翻译的详细一点、准确度高点就好了

英语翻译
最好是翻译的详细一点、准确度高点就好了

The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.
上海将要在2010年举行世博会.世博会历史悠久,但从未在亚洲举行过.（有错误,日本有举行过了）.所以2010年世博会是我们所有亚洲人的骄傲.
Our government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai,as a host city,will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai,I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
我们政府已经承诺这届世博会将是历届最好的一届.上海,作文主办城市,会有更多的机会快速发展.作文一名上海学生,我要好好学习英语,这样才能以世博会的志愿者身份,帮助外国朋友更多地了解上海.
2010 World Expo is getting closer,civilization and harmonious call is ringing in our ears.Shanghai is the host city of the World Expo,2010.
2001世博会越来越近了.和谐的号召声不绝于耳.上海,2010年世博会的主办城市.
As an volunteer of the Expro.I think it will not only be a opportunity to the development to Shanghai,but also to our national spirit reflected in the Expro.
作为一名世博会的志愿者,我认为这不仅仅对上海的发展来讲是一次机遇,同时也有益于让我们国家的精神体现于世博会上.
World Expo has a great influence and has a long history of international activities,it is also a grand gathering of human beings.People from all over the world get together to display their products and skills,and boast of their motherland and hometown ,which has a unique appeal ,the mood is stirring.
世博会影响力非常大,作为国际重大活动具有很久的历史.它也是我们人类的一次盛大聚会.全世界各地的人们会聚这里展示他们国家和家乡的特产和特别技能,这些都很特别,人们心情也很激动.
World Expo is a platform converying what we hosts can do and will do perfect.
世博会是一个表达我们东道主能做些什么,我们将做得很完美的平台.
Being a glorious World Expo volunteers,I feel very proud and looking forward to seeing a bright future.We must also make our own contribution to the World Expo to prove that we will go through our own hands,to heat the hearts of sincere and practical action to achieve the world's commitment to Shanghai:" City,Better Life!"
作为一名光荣的世博会志愿者,我感到非常骄傲.期待着一个光明的未来.我们也必须一起为世博会做出贡献,通过我们的手,温暖真诚的心,并用实际行动来证明世界对上海的承诺“城市,让生活更美好!”
I would like to show our foreign friends to the ever-changing Shanghai and long-history China through the World Expo,doing a favor to my country through my own efforts.
我非常乐意通过世博会向国外朋友们展示上海的发展变化和中国的悠久历史,通过我个人的努力为我的祖国做出贡献.
I am looking forward to the World Expo ,and I will work with the Expo as well as growing with the development of Shanghai.
我期待着世博会,我将和世博会一起工作,和上海一起成长.