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帮忙检查一下有没语法错误

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帮忙检查一下有没语法错误
①When night befell the blatant city, I canonly say good night to you.
②I believe that the most beautiful thing isworthy of waiting and the sweetest fruit need patience.
欢迎提出修改意见
①主从句时态不一致,befell 是过去时,而can是现在时,可考虑改为:can--could
或把befell改为befalls,后面的can不变.
②中的the sweetest fruit 是不可数名词词组,因此need 应改为needs.
worthy of waiting 应改为worth waiting
或worthy of being waited
或:worthy to be done
be worth doing
=be worthy of being done
=be worthy to be done
都表示"某事值得被做"