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【急!】改写英语短文【写的好有加分!】

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【急!】改写英语短文【写的好有加分!】
1、把人称改为Tom
2、起一个标题
3、最好加几句简单开头结尾(初二水平)
I get up at six in the morning.Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.After a quick breakfast,I go to school in my mother's car.It takes us more than half an hour to get there.
We have four hour classes in the morning.I have luch at my grandparents',because their home is nearer to my school.
After two classes in the afternoon,school is over.Then we clean our classroom.
I get home at about half past five.We have dinner at seven.After dinner I do my homework.If I finish my homesork early,I can watch TV for half an hour.I go to bed at half past nine or ten.
4、改为上周五
我也写完了一篇,你给我改改吧!
Tom's last Friday
Last Friday,Tom got up at six in the morning.Then he had a quiet breakfast.After that,he went to school by bus.It took him 20 minutes to got there.
In the morning,he had four hour classes .Then he had lunch at his grandparents' house,because their home is nearer his school.After school.He got home at half past five.Then he had delicious food at his house,did his homework and went to bed at ten o'clock.He said:The day was boring.
Tom's last Friday
Last Friday,Tom got up at six in the morning.Then he washed his face and brushed his teeth.After a quick breakfast,he went to school in his mother's car.It took them more than half an hour to get there.
They had four hour classes in the morning.He had lunch at his grandparents',because their home is nearer to his school.(这是现在也存在的事实状态,故不用一般过去式)
After two classes in the afternoon,school was over.Then they cleaned their classroom.
He got home at about half past five.They had dinner at seven.After dinner he did his homework.If he had finished his homework early,he could watch TV for half an hour.He went to bed at half past nine or ten.That wasTom's Friday.
再问: 我也写完了一篇,你给我改改吧!