作业帮拜托~~高人帮我改下语法错误~~在线等~~感谢~~
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拜托~~高人帮我改下语法错误~~在线等~~感谢~~
大家帮我改一下吧~~里面有很多低级语法错误~~但我现在有事忙~~今天又要完成~~拜脱了~~文章写得不太好~~大家有建议也可以说~~
I have the honor to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, at a smalltown of Hami city, Xinjiang Province. I graduate form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And i also think the university of UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral english and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would be make my life more interesting.
In past four years, i have acquired basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But i think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the studying of human resources managementbecause it is a subject that interests me greatly. The globalisation has provoked a serious crisis in the actual word economy giving human resources management an important role in finding a solution to this crisis. I believe that human beings are the principal players in any organization, they are flexible and the only ones who can manage the process of change that enterprises need to respond to this difficult times.
Upon graduation form your school, I hope i will be able to join a large and dynamic company and follow a career in human resources management. I am sure that the successful future of any ambitious company lies here. I also hope to acquire a lot of experience in order to be able to give me more confidence to my work.
I learned form your brochure that your school has a strong faculty and a very good academic environment. The university located west London. And it have convenient transportation. But the maintenance is half of London. And the university very much welcome foreign students. Hence my desire to further my education in your country, especially at your university, where I think I can receiver comprehensive training. It seems that the courses you offer are precisely what I wish to take. I am especially interested in those course on management and information resources. I therefore see your program as my first choice as I try to upgrade my education. I believe that such training will help put me on the forefront of the human resource management in China.
大家帮我改一下吧~~里面有很多低级语法错误~~但我现在有事忙~~今天又要完成~~拜脱了~~文章写得不太好~~大家有建议也可以说~~
I have the honor to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, at a smalltown of Hami city, Xinjiang Province. I graduate form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And i also think the university of UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral english and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would be make my life more interesting.
In past four years, i have acquired basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But i think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the studying of human resources managementbecause it is a subject that interests me greatly. The globalisation has provoked a serious crisis in the actual word economy giving human resources management an important role in finding a solution to this crisis. I believe that human beings are the principal players in any organization, they are flexible and the only ones who can manage the process of change that enterprises need to respond to this difficult times.
Upon graduation form your school, I hope i will be able to join a large and dynamic company and follow a career in human resources management. I am sure that the successful future of any ambitious company lies here. I also hope to acquire a lot of experience in order to be able to give me more confidence to my work.
I learned form your brochure that your school has a strong faculty and a very good academic environment. The university located west London. And it have convenient transportation. But the maintenance is half of London. And the university very much welcome foreign students. Hence my desire to further my education in your country, especially at your university, where I think I can receiver comprehensive training. It seems that the courses you offer are precisely what I wish to take. I am especially interested in those course on management and information resources. I therefore see your program as my first choice as I try to upgrade my education. I believe that such training will help put me on the forefront of the human resource management in China.
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I 【have the honor】am honored to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, [at] in a small town of Hami 【city】 City, Xinjiang Province. I [graduate] graduated form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study （in the） UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And 【i】 I also think 【the university】 （that） universities 【of】 in the UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral 【english】 English and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would [be] make my life more interesting.
In （the） past four years, 【i】 I have acquired （the） basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But 【i】 I think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the 【studying】 study of human 【resources】 resource management because it is a subject that interests me greatly. The globalisation has provoked a serious crisis in the actual 【word】 world economy giving human 【resources】 resource management an important role in finding a solution to this crisis. I believe that human beings are the principal players in any organization, they are flexible and the only ones who can manage the process of change that enterprises need to respond to （in） this difficult times.
Upon graduation form your school, I hope 【i】 I will be able to join a large and dynamic company and follow a career in human 【resources】 resource management. I am sure that （this is an important factor for） the successful future of any ambitious company 【lies here】. I also hope to acquire a lot of experience in order to be able to give me more confidence 【to】 in my work.
I learned form your brochure that your school has a strong faculty and a very good academic environment. The university （is） located （in） west London 【.And it have】 with convenient transportation. But the maintenance is half of London. And the university very much 【welcome】 welcomes foreign students. Hence my desire to further my education in your country, especially at your university, where I think I can 【receiver】 receive comprehensive 【training】 trainings. It seems that the courses you offer are precisely what I wish to take. I am especially interested in those 【course】 courses on management and information resources. I therefore see your program as my first choice as I try to upgrade my education. I believe that such training will help put me on the forefront of the human resource management in China.
I 【have the honor】am honored to present a brief introduction of myself to you .My name is XX.I was born in January 18th, 1987, [at] in a small town of Hami 【city】 City, Xinjiang Province. I [graduate] graduated form the information management and information systems department of xxx University in July 2008.
Study （in the） UK is my dream . I like the British landscape, living environment, architectural style and long history. And 【i】 I also think 【the university】 （that） universities 【of】 in the UK have modern equipment and high-quality teaching. I hope it can improve my oral 【english】 English and interpersonal skills. I like London very much, and I want to live there. I believe that would [be] make my life more interesting.
In （the） past four years, 【i】 I have acquired （the） basic knowledge of management both in theory and in practice. But 【i】 I think this is not enough, I hope I can continue to learning the knowledge of management. I am applying for a course in the 【studying】 study of human 【resources】 resource management because it is a subject that interests me greatly. The globalisation has provoked a serious crisis in the actual 【word】 world economy giving human 【resources】 resource management an important role in finding a solution to this crisis. I believe that human beings are the principal players in any organization, they are flexible and the only ones who can manage the process of change that enterprises need to respond to （in） this difficult times.
Upon graduation form your school, I hope 【i】 I will be able to join a large and dynamic company and follow a career in human 【resources】 resource management. I am sure that （this is an important factor for） the successful future of any ambitious company 【lies here】. I also hope to acquire a lot of experience in order to be able to give me more confidence 【to】 in my work.
I learned form your brochure that your school has a strong faculty and a very good academic environment. The university （is） located （in） west London 【.And it have】 with convenient transportation. But the maintenance is half of London. And the university very much 【welcome】 welcomes foreign students. Hence my desire to further my education in your country, especially at your university, where I think I can 【receiver】 receive comprehensive 【training】 trainings. It seems that the courses you offer are precisely what I wish to take. I am especially interested in those 【course】 courses on management and information resources. I therefore see your program as my first choice as I try to upgrade my education. I believe that such training will help put me on the forefront of the human resource management in China.