作业帮【急】我的英语作文求改错,
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【急】我的英语作文求改错,
My grandma influence me a lot.My grandma's house is near my primary school and middle school,so,I have spend a lot of time with my grandma and grandpa.Even longer than the time I spend with my parents.
My grandma taught me that don'lie to the person who loves you and don't afraid to meet challenge.My typeface is like her ,because she taught me writting before I went to primary school.When I was a child,I afraid swimming.She encouraged me to learn it,now,swimming is one of my favorite sports.She also encourages to take part in school activities.Last Friday ,I held a dancing-party in school,she said she is proud of me.
My grandma is influence me a lot.She was a teacher before her retired and she is a teacher in my life.
My grandma influence me a lot.My grandma's house is near my primary school and middle school,so,I have spend a lot of time with my grandma and grandpa.Even longer than the time I spend with my parents.
My grandma taught me that don'lie to the person who loves you and don't afraid to meet challenge.My typeface is like her ,because she taught me writting before I went to primary school.When I was a child,I afraid swimming.She encouraged me to learn it,now,swimming is one of my favorite sports.She also encourages to take part in school activities.Last Friday ,I held a dancing-party in school,she said she is proud of me.
My grandma is influence me a lot.She was a teacher before her retired and she is a teacher in my life.
My grandma influence me a lot. influence用原型肯定不对,奶奶健在吗?在的话用三单,不然用过去式或现在完成时,现在完成好些.
I have spend （spent 过去分词）a lot of time with my grandma and grandpa
Even longer than the time I （have）spent with my parents.
My grandma taught me that I should never lie to the person(单数好奇怪,只有一个人爱你?要不改成anyone吧 任何一个人) who loves me and (that这个不能省)I shouldn't be afraid to meet challenges.
My typeface is like her (hers)我的字体像她的（字体）.这样才对,你的字体难道能像奶奶这个人?
好多错误,先回答下,再慢慢改,你的时态和动词运用有点弱啊
because she （加had）taught me to write before I went to primary school. 过去的两个动作有明显的前后顺序,前面那个最好用过去完成时.
I was afraid of swimming 你一直把afraid当动词用了?它是形容词啊
She also encouraged me to take part in school activities.
she said she is（was） proud of me.
My grandma has influenced me a lot.
She was a teacher before her（改成she） retired but she is always a teacher in my life.
再问： 麻烦了，还有别的错误么？
再答： 改完了，自己看下.........
I have spend （spent 过去分词）a lot of time with my grandma and grandpa
Even longer than the time I （have）spent with my parents.
My grandma taught me that I should never lie to the person(单数好奇怪,只有一个人爱你?要不改成anyone吧 任何一个人) who loves me and (that这个不能省)I shouldn't be afraid to meet challenges.
My typeface is like her (hers)我的字体像她的（字体）.这样才对,你的字体难道能像奶奶这个人?
好多错误,先回答下,再慢慢改,你的时态和动词运用有点弱啊
because she （加had）taught me to write before I went to primary school. 过去的两个动作有明显的前后顺序,前面那个最好用过去完成时.
I was afraid of swimming 你一直把afraid当动词用了?它是形容词啊
She also encouraged me to take part in school activities.
she said she is（was） proud of me.
My grandma has influenced me a lot.
She was a teacher before her（改成she） retired but she is always a teacher in my life.
再问： 麻烦了，还有别的错误么？
再答： 改完了，自己看下.........