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英语改错Dear editor,Lastweek,two students of our school get stom

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英语改错
Dear editor,
Lastweek,two students of our school get stomach ill because they eat fry food outof school.In a way,in order to make money,some sellers ignore people’shealth and safe.
Interms of this situation,students should eat foods on campus.Although foodsoutside are better than it that our school make,experts advice that we shouldeat foods on campus.
Toavoid things like that occur,I think we should eat in larger restaurant.Besides,we should eat foods as far as possible.After all,school must guarantee ourhealth.On the other hands,we should follow the food diet.It is beneficial toour health.
Sincerely
Li Hua
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想了很久 get改成got eat改成ate fry改成fried a改成this it改成those make改成makes occur改成occuring
restaurant改成restaurants hands改成hand beneficial改成benefit
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