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请把这篇英语短文 语法不对的地方请修改过来 ,
Dear Tom:
I‘m now studing in Shan Dong College Of Tourism & Hospitality .We have less lessons compare to high school life,but the pressure didnt decrease,because lessons are much harder than before,and there are only 4 years for my to enter the community,which means i will have bigger responsibilities.
Teachers and classmates are very friendly to me,that made me feel better from homesickness.and i found that Cambridge is a warm community.I have volunteered to the community and will spend 2 hours every week volunteering.
It is really fun,because i can develop myself!by the way,i would like to invite you to spend the X-mas with me,we can hang out and play for the whole holiday,enjoying the snow view.Hope you can reply soon~
yours
Li Hua
Dear Tom:
I‘m now studing in Shan Dong College Of Tourism & Hospitality .We have less lessons compare to high school life,but the pressure didnt decrease,because lessons are much harder than before,and there are only 4 years for my to enter the community,which means i will have bigger responsibilities.
Teachers and classmates are very friendly to me,that made me feel better from homesickness.and i found that Cambridge is a warm community.I have volunteered to the community and will spend 2 hours every week volunteering.
It is really fun,because i can develop myself!by the way,i would like to invite you to spend the X-mas with me,we can hang out and play for the whole holiday,enjoying the snow view.Hope you can reply soon~
yours
Li Hua
compare to--compared with,for my to enter:两种该法：1 for me to enter,2 for my entering；
bigger最好改成more；that --which； will spend-would spend；every week volunteering-every week in volunteering; develop-improve;
bigger最好改成more；that --which； will spend-would spend；every week volunteering-every week in volunteering; develop-improve;
请把这篇英语短文 语法不对的地方请修改过来 ,
请英语导师修改一下我的作文,三分钟演讲,很多语法可能不对,请修改谢谢.
请帮忙修改这篇英语作文的错误语法.
请帮我批改一下这篇英语短文,语法上有错误的地方都找出来~
英语作文/语法：希望各位朋友帮忙修改下面的作文,句子不通或语法不对或用词不当请指出,
请英语高手过来帮个忙啦~是关于 语法的
请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语短文
改错误,把不对的地方改正过来
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请把这篇英语短文的短语列出来.
这段话这样翻译有没有语法或者其他错误的地方啊,请英语好的帮忙修改下.
请改下英语写错的地方这段英语有写错的地方请修改一下,再加些修饰语把内容完善些.My final exams at sch