作业帮帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)
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帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)
以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),使其成为完美的作文.
Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing.Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.Because she feel very sad.She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.
以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?
另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!
以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),使其成为完美的作文.
Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing.Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.Because she feel very sad.She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.
以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?
另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!
Mother Cat and Baby Cat （go） fishing.Suddenly a bird (comes).She (feels) very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.(So) she feel very sad.She (feels) happy again because there is a butterfly (comes).And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.(At last,the cat can't catch any fish)