作业帮帮我看看这句我自己写的英语 语法上有错误没?
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帮我看看这句我自己写的英语 语法上有错误没?
It can be concluded that people in whatever age group spend most of their leisure time watching TV annually.
It can be concluded that people in whatever age group spend most of their leisure time watching TV annually.
越简单越好：
It can be concluded that people at any age tend to spend most of their time watching TV.
你说most of their leisure time,那什么时间是不宝贵的咧!
还有annually多余.
不管是应试还是平时的交流,言简意赅都是最重要的.
可以看出你的功底还不错,但英语水平的高低决不在于句子的长短或专业术语（big words）的多少.
继续努力吧!
It can be concluded that people at any age tend to spend most of their time watching TV.
你说most of their leisure time,那什么时间是不宝贵的咧!
还有annually多余.
不管是应试还是平时的交流,言简意赅都是最重要的.
可以看出你的功底还不错,但英语水平的高低决不在于句子的长短或专业术语（big words）的多少.
继续努力吧!