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Hello,everyone! Today,I will tell you something adout films.I like movies very much,they are a great form of art. The sound, light, and flashing pictures of movies are always able to bring stimuli and pleasure for us. Movies have brought a lot of happiness into my life. I like movies especially terrorist films.When I watch them,I really nervous,but I still watch until it over.I think we can watch them when we feel tired,because it
can make us feel relaxing.
I love the movies of war too.Although it a little rank smell of blood,they teach me a lot about history.I see many national heroes from them.Their lives greatly,dies honorably.I am moved deeply by theirs stories.
Films is one of the main part of our lives.Because of films,our lives get more and more beautiful!
Hello,everyone! Today,I will tell you something adout films.I like movies very much,they are a great form of art. The sound, light, and flashing pictures of movies are always able to bring stimuli and pleasure for us. Movies have brought a lot of happiness into my life. I like movies especially terrorist films.When I watch them,I really nervous,but I still watch until it over.I think we can watch them when we feel tired,because it
can make us feel relaxing.
I love the movies of war too.Although it a little rank smell of blood,they teach me a lot about history.I see many national heroes from them.Their lives greatly,dies honorably.I am moved deeply by theirs stories.
Films is one of the main part of our lives.Because of films,our lives get more and more beautiful!
ing sth to sb我觉得第一处用到bring的地方用to 比for好.I am really nervous 才对.
see a film 而不是watch .until it is over
relaxed而不是relaxing.应该是感到放松,而不是令人放松.Although it a little rank smell of blood缺谓语动词.Their lives greatly改成They live greatly,die honorably.Films is...主谓不一致.就说这些吧,水平有限,别的地方不较准,只会用一般现在时就写出这样的作文,不错了.
see a film 而不是watch .until it is over
relaxed而不是relaxing.应该是感到放松,而不是令人放松.Although it a little rank smell of blood缺谓语动词.Their lives greatly改成They live greatly,die honorably.Films is...主谓不一致.就说这些吧,水平有限,别的地方不较准,只会用一般现在时就写出这样的作文,不错了.