作业帮给大家一篇英语短文,看有没有错.如果要改请在原文上改,请专业严格一点,本人为初一学生,不要太复杂.
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给大家一篇英语短文,看有没有错.如果要改请在原文上改,请专业严格一点,本人为初一学生,不要太复杂.
2010 world expo is the first world expo held in China.It brings us incomparably glory.For I have been to Shanghai world expo:I felt very excited.I am glad to see that national culture.2010 world expo makes me understand things more than the other students.I like all the kinds of seeds in the UK pavilion,because I'm very interested in biology.At the same time,I also enjoy visiting the French pavilion.There full of romantic breath,and it has many wonderful movies.2010 world expo really brings me a lot.I love to visit the world expo.
2010 world expo is the first world expo held in China.It brings us incomparably glory.For I have been to Shanghai world expo:I felt very excited.I am glad to see that national culture.2010 world expo makes me understand things more than the other students.I like all the kinds of seeds in the UK pavilion,because I'm very interested in biology.At the same time,I also enjoy visiting the French pavilion.There full of romantic breath,and it has many wonderful movies.2010 world expo really brings me a lot.I love to visit the world expo.
首先,你这篇文章的时态应该改成过去式,因为你讲述的都是过去发生的.文章前两句是讲述客观事实的,所以时态用一般现在式.
For I have been to Shanghai world expo: I felt very excited. 这句中 for 改成 because.冒号改成逗号. I felt very excited because I have been to Shanghai world expo.改成这样更好一些.
再问： 那啥，实在不好意思……很多过去式本人不会呢……不好意思劳烦你，但是本人真的不是非常擅长英语……
再答： For I have been to Shanghai world expo: I felt very excited. I am glad to see that national culture. 2010 world expo makes me understand things more than the other students. I like all the kinds of seeds in the UK pavilion, because I'm very interested in biology. At the same time, I also enjoy visiting the French pavilion. There full of romantic breath, and it has many wonderful movies. 2010 world expo really brings me a lot. I love to visit the world expo. 如果要想文章更通顺，适当改几个连词，可改成 I felt very excited when I went to Shanghai world expo.I was glad to see the culture of eah country.I not only got rich knowledge from 2010 world expo ,but also enjoyed myself. For example, I visited the French pavilion which had full of romantic breath, and I also saw many wonderful movies. 2010 world expo really brings me a lot. I love the traveling of the world expo of Shanghai .
For I have been to Shanghai world expo: I felt very excited. 这句中 for 改成 because.冒号改成逗号. I felt very excited because I have been to Shanghai world expo.改成这样更好一些.
再问： 那啥，实在不好意思……很多过去式本人不会呢……不好意思劳烦你，但是本人真的不是非常擅长英语……
再答： For I have been to Shanghai world expo: I felt very excited. I am glad to see that national culture. 2010 world expo makes me understand things more than the other students. I like all the kinds of seeds in the UK pavilion, because I'm very interested in biology. At the same time, I also enjoy visiting the French pavilion. There full of romantic breath, and it has many wonderful movies. 2010 world expo really brings me a lot. I love to visit the world expo. 如果要想文章更通顺，适当改几个连词，可改成 I felt very excited when I went to Shanghai world expo.I was glad to see the culture of eah country.I not only got rich knowledge from 2010 world expo ,but also enjoyed myself. For example, I visited the French pavilion which had full of romantic breath, and I also saw many wonderful movies. 2010 world expo really brings me a lot. I love the traveling of the world expo of Shanghai .
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