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My First Girlfriend
It's so great blow that my first girlfriend give me that she has already break off our engagement.Before she go abroad,she left a letter of brief and to the point for me,said:"I was so disappointed with you"It's my fault I think,because that I was so busy with my business everyday,the relationship between us didn't go well,she decided to break up.She didn't cry and me too.
One day,I chanced to see a wellknown make of car which reminded me of the first time I meet her
That day was sunny,no rain no cloudy,I remember clearly.The quarrel between her and her boyfriend on the street called forth my curiosity while I was driving with Deny,a friend of my bosom,had a heavy build.She was so beautiful and her figure was so excellent that I put on brake to wander what happened.From their said I know that her boyfriend had booked her in for a good night with him,she refused and then break away from him.
"Hey I know her,she is a friend of mine,I think you ...HaHa...I can help you my friend!" Deny smiled."But,what about her boyfriend?" "No problem,if you love her in heart."he looked seriously at me.
From that day I was bend on writing letters for love.So lucky I was,she become my girlfriend and we cement our relationship for seven years .
My First Girlfriend
It's so great blow that my first girlfriend give me that she has already break off our engagement.Before she go abroad,she left a letter of brief and to the point for me,said:"I was so disappointed with you"It's my fault I think,because that I was so busy with my business everyday,the relationship between us didn't go well,she decided to break up.She didn't cry and me too.
One day,I chanced to see a wellknown make of car which reminded me of the first time I meet her
That day was sunny,no rain no cloudy,I remember clearly.The quarrel between her and her boyfriend on the street called forth my curiosity while I was driving with Deny,a friend of my bosom,had a heavy build.She was so beautiful and her figure was so excellent that I put on brake to wander what happened.From their said I know that her boyfriend had booked her in for a good night with him,she refused and then break away from him.
"Hey I know her,she is a friend of mine,I think you ...HaHa...I can help you my friend!" Deny smiled."But,what about her boyfriend?" "No problem,if you love her in heart."he looked seriously at me.
From that day I was bend on writing letters for love.So lucky I was,she become my girlfriend and we cement our relationship for seven years .
My First Girlfriend
I's so great blow that my dute first girlfriend give me that she has already break off our engagement.Before she go abroad,she left a letter of brief and to the point for me,said:"I was so disappointe with you"It's my fault I think,because that I was so busy with my business everyday,the relationship between us didn't go well,she decided to break up.She didn't cry and me too.
One day,I chanced to see a wellknown make of car which reminded me of the first time I meet her
That day was sunny,no rain no cloudy,I remember clearly.The quarrel between her and her boyfriend on the street called forth my curiosity while I was driving with Deny,a friend of my bosom,had a heavy build.She was so beautiful and her figure was so excellent that I put on brake to wander what happened.From their said I know that her boyfriend had booked her in for a good night with him,she refused and then break away from him.
"Hey I know her,she is a friend of mine,I think you ...HaHa...I can help you my friend!" Deny smiled."But,what about her boyfriend?" "No problem,if you love her in heart."he looked seriously at me.
From that day I was bend in writing letters for love.So lucky I was,she become my girlfriend and we cement our relationship for seven years .
给分,写了那么多啊!
I's so great blow that my dute first girlfriend give me that she has already break off our engagement.Before she go abroad,she left a letter of brief and to the point for me,said:"I was so disappointe with you"It's my fault I think,because that I was so busy with my business everyday,the relationship between us didn't go well,she decided to break up.She didn't cry and me too.
One day,I chanced to see a wellknown make of car which reminded me of the first time I meet her
That day was sunny,no rain no cloudy,I remember clearly.The quarrel between her and her boyfriend on the street called forth my curiosity while I was driving with Deny,a friend of my bosom,had a heavy build.She was so beautiful and her figure was so excellent that I put on brake to wander what happened.From their said I know that her boyfriend had booked her in for a good night with him,she refused and then break away from him.
"Hey I know her,she is a friend of mine,I think you ...HaHa...I can help you my friend!" Deny smiled."But,what about her boyfriend?" "No problem,if you love her in heart."he looked seriously at me.
From that day I was bend in writing letters for love.So lucky I was,she become my girlfriend and we cement our relationship for seven years .
给分,写了那么多啊!