作业帮谁帮我改下这篇英语作文.谢谢.
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谁帮我改下这篇英语作文.谢谢.
Memorable Event
In the past life,I have many fond memories.Remember that time,I feela special happy.
Chiildhood is a beautiful everyone will have unforgettable memories.I'm seventeen years old now,but the recollection of the fun and amusement is like a sweet dream.
In a holiday,our family went to climb the mountain my father told my mother and me that the first one to get to the awards,would be given some awards.We jumped with joy.We started to run up.I think my mother is very cute,much like a child.
At first I took the lead.A few minutes later.I was tired and my mother was ahead of me.Don't look at my mother older than me,but she patience really is not bad.So is very good.
But I followed my thirst for the awards and continued climbing.At last I reacheed the awards first.The awards is a Teddy.The Teddy is a very enteplush toys.I like it a lot.
There we had a picnic.About three o'clock p.m.We embarked on a homeword journey.
That memory is very well.I feel very happy.That plush toy is still.I like it a lot.
So I feel in the past life have many fond memories.
就是这篇.如果可以加什么的.帮我加一下.谢谢啦.真的很谢谢.
我们外教老那个的.帮帮忙啊.很急很急
Memorable Event
In the past life,I have many fond memories.Remember that time,I feela special happy.
Chiildhood is a beautiful everyone will have unforgettable memories.I'm seventeen years old now,but the recollection of the fun and amusement is like a sweet dream.
In a holiday,our family went to climb the mountain my father told my mother and me that the first one to get to the awards,would be given some awards.We jumped with joy.We started to run up.I think my mother is very cute,much like a child.
At first I took the lead.A few minutes later.I was tired and my mother was ahead of me.Don't look at my mother older than me,but she patience really is not bad.So is very good.
But I followed my thirst for the awards and continued climbing.At last I reacheed the awards first.The awards is a Teddy.The Teddy is a very enteplush toys.I like it a lot.
There we had a picnic.About three o'clock p.m.We embarked on a homeword journey.
That memory is very well.I feel very happy.That plush toy is still.I like it a lot.
So I feel in the past life have many fond memories.
就是这篇.如果可以加什么的.帮我加一下.谢谢啦.真的很谢谢.
我们外教老那个的.帮帮忙啊.很急很急
额,典型的chaglish(中式英语),故事我看懂了,但语法上有一些错误,可能外教会有疑惑,把有语法错误的句子改下就可以了