作业帮有没高手帮我改下这段英语
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有没高手帮我改下这段英语
这段英语有10个地方错的!麻烦帮改下,
Now I don't watch televisions,but a few years ago I watch it every night.In those days I was not a big tired after a day's work,so watch TV became my favorite pastime.Unfortunate,there were too many people among my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred other.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing with one after another and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.
这段英语有10个地方错的!麻烦帮改下,
Now I don't watch televisions,but a few years ago I watch it every night.In those days I was not a big tired after a day's work,so watch TV became my favorite pastime.Unfortunate,there were too many people among my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred other.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing with one after another and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.
一些时态有小错误,修改和完善后如下：
Now I don't watch television,but a few years ago I watched it every night.
（watch tv 不用加s）
In those days I was not a bit tired after a day's work,so watching TV became my favorite pastime.
（not a little=very not a bit=not at all
如果楼主想表达我回家后很累,所以要看电视,应该用little
如果想表达我回家后一点也不累,所以要看电视,应该用bit
watch tv 此处做主语,应该为watching Tv）
Unfortunately,there were too many people in my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred others.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing with each other and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.
（one after another 是一个又一个,纷至沓来的意思
这里互相争吵用 argue with each other即可）
修改后的原文合并如下：
Now I don't watch television,but a few years ago I watched it every night.
In those days I was not a bit tired after a day's work,so watching TV became my favorite pastime.
Unfortunately,there were too many people in my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred others.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing with each other and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.
Now I don't watch television,but a few years ago I watched it every night.
（watch tv 不用加s）
In those days I was not a bit tired after a day's work,so watching TV became my favorite pastime.
（not a little=very not a bit=not at all
如果楼主想表达我回家后很累,所以要看电视,应该用little
如果想表达我回家后一点也不累,所以要看电视,应该用bit
watch tv 此处做主语,应该为watching Tv）
Unfortunately,there were too many people in my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred others.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing with each other and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.
（one after another 是一个又一个,纷至沓来的意思
这里互相争吵用 argue with each other即可）
修改后的原文合并如下：
Now I don't watch television,but a few years ago I watched it every night.
In those days I was not a bit tired after a day's work,so watching TV became my favorite pastime.
Unfortunately,there were too many people in my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred others.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing with each other and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.