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if i must choose one from tv ,cell and web to give up ,it will be tv . with the development of science and technology ,tv isn't be necessary for me now .i can do everything on the web which i do on tv .i even can watch tv programs on the cell .most of things i want to konw ,like news and informations ,i can find them on the web .and i don't have time to watch tv ,you know there are great many ads in the tv .cell and web are more convenient .so my choice is tv .
解题思路： 整篇文章看来，总体还不错，语法错误不多。不过还可以写的有深度点或者是用一些套句，如The reasons are as follows.。另外注意用一些过对使文章过渡自然流畅，如:Besides,（此外），或者，on the one hand,on the other hand.(一方面，另一方面），还有First of all,....Second...Third...
解题过程：
if I must choose one from TV,cell and web to give up ,it will be TV. With the development of science and technology ,TV isn't （去掉be)necessary for me now .I can do everything on the web which i do on TV. I even can watch TV programs on the cell .Most of things 加that i want to konw ,like news and information(无复数), can be found (跟前面的most of things构成被动） on the web .And i don't have time to watch TV, for (去掉口头语you know,加for:因为，变成并列句）there are a(a great many 固定搭配） great many ads on TV .cell and web are more convenient .so my choice is tv .
同学应该是用手机或电脑打的字吧。注意TV（电视），I（我）要大写
解题过程：
if I must choose one from TV,cell and web to give up ,it will be TV. With the development of science and technology ,TV isn't （去掉be)necessary for me now .I can do everything on the web which i do on TV. I even can watch TV programs on the cell .Most of things 加that i want to konw ,like news and information(无复数), can be found (跟前面的most of things构成被动） on the web .And i don't have time to watch TV, for (去掉口头语you know,加for:因为，变成并列句）there are a(a great many 固定搭配） great many ads on TV .cell and web are more convenient .so my choice is tv .
同学应该是用手机或电脑打的字吧。注意TV（电视），I（我）要大写